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把央视版《笑傲江湖·天地作合》插曲给改了

2017-07-10 16:10:35| 分类：原创诗歌 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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笑傲江湖（央视版）

莽莽苍节兮群山巍峨

日月光照兮纷纭错落

丝竹共振兮执节者歌

行云流水兮用心无多

求大道以弥兵兮凌万物而超脱

觅知音因固难得兮唯天地与作合

求大道以弥兵兮凌万物而超脱

觅知音因无奈何兮唯天地与作合

笑傲江湖（手痒版）

昨日有人推荐此曲，总觉得哪里不甚完美（就是二四句），----手痒了

动手改了一下----

莽莽苍苍兮群山巍峨

日月继明兮缉熙有莫

丝竹共振兮执节者歌

行云流水兮其心无多　

求大道以弭兵兮越万物而超脱

觅知音固难得兮唯天地与作合

求大道以弭兵兮越万物而超脱

觅知音无奈何兮唯天地与作合

改动理由：

1.日月继明兮缉熙有莫 世间犹有黑暗，寓意人性江湖的缺失存在的客观性，映衬下句“丝竹共振持节者”的可贵性。

2.行云流水兮其心无多　：行云流水本无心，何来可“用”？此为认识上的疏忽。

3.越万物而超脱：万物本平等，“凌”于他物之上岂非成了“左冷禅岳不群”之流？如何“笑傲”起来？“越”字含义只有客观上的超越而无主观上假于他物之意。

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